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Okay, I found a bit that I think is safe to post.  Just about everything at this stage is up for revising so it may get tweaked by the time the story is posted.

That said, here it is, a teaser, from an as-yet untitled WIP.   

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“I want from here forward to sleep only on eagle down,” Aragorn mumbled, shutting his eyes.

“Perhaps when you are King, you can arrange to do just that,” Gandalf said quietly. 

Aragorn opened his eyes again, for rare it was that Gandalf ever sounded so wistful.  “Are you all right?”

“Of course,” Gandalf snapped, suddenly cross.  “Why ever wouldn’t I be?  After all, there’s only the small matter of my traveling companion having been gravely wounded and a blizzard trapping us in a cave far from proper care, but no matter.  I should imagine I will break into song and dance a jig any moment now.”

“There’s no need for sarcasm.”

“There’s every need for sarcasm, and had you lived as long as I have, you would see that immediately instead of chiding me like I was your infant son speaking out of turn.”

Aragorn chuckled.  “If you were my son, I would send you to bed without any supper for using that tone of voice with me.”

“There you have it, then; it’s well and good I am not your son.  At any rate, I would expect my father to have better sense than to go tumbling down mountains.”

“I must be getting better.”

“I beg your pardon?”

“For you to grouse so.  I must not be on death’s doorstep.”

Gandalf snorted, then clamped his unlit pipe between his teeth.  “No, you are not on death’s doorstep.  The footpath leading to it, perhaps.”

~~~

'kay, that's all for now! :)

Date: 2010-10-14 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silivren-tinu.livejournal.com
*snatches teaser and gobbles it down* Aw, that's sooo promising! Aragorn-Gandalf friendship, Aragorn angst, and eagles - I can't wait to read that story! :D For some strange reason, I have that rather weird image of Gandalf dancing a jig in my head now... LOL!!!

Date: 2010-10-14 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
LOL... just imagine him grumpy while he's jigging. *g*

I'm hammering away at the story... snow and feathers and bandages flying everywhere.... it's gotten quite messy around my desk. *sigh*
Edited Date: 2010-10-14 06:49 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-15 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silivren-tinu.livejournal.com
LOL! I hope your family doesn't mind having to wade through eagle feathers, snow, and bandages for a while! I bet Domino would enjoy the mess, though. *g*

Date: 2010-10-15 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
He'd be eating the snow and feathers and Pip would be chasing the bandages!

Date: 2010-10-16 12:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silivren-tinu.livejournal.com
I just hope you'll still be able to write in the midst of all that commotion! LOL!

Date: 2010-10-16 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
LOL... that's actually not a whole lot different than the normal commotion around here. *g*

Date: 2010-10-14 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Oh good stuff!

If you want to keep with Tolkien's English for Gandalf he would never use the word 'sidewalk', though. Perhaps pathway or footpath.

Date: 2010-10-14 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
You know, I wondered about that, whether in England they were called sidewalks... thanks for the correction!

Date: 2010-10-15 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] envinyatar99.livejournal.com
In fact, what you call sidewalks, we call pavement - which can lead to some real confusion!

Date: 2010-10-15 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] envinyatar99.livejournal.com
Sorry, meant to add: Great excerpt, looking forward to the story.

Date: 2010-10-16 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Thank you! I hope you enjoy the finished product. :)

Date: 2010-10-16 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Oh my, yes, it could... when we say pavement we mean the street itself, usually!

Date: 2010-10-14 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vilwarien.livejournal.com
Mm. Aragorn-Gandalf friendship! Lovely. I can't wait to read the whole story! ;)

Date: 2010-10-14 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Thank you! There'll be lots of Aragorn and Gandalf fussing at one another in this one. :)

Date: 2010-10-14 08:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Oh boy oh boy! *beams*

Date: 2010-10-14 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Glad you liked that! :)

Date: 2010-10-14 10:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
I just *love* light, teasing banter.

Date: 2010-10-14 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inzilbeth-liz.livejournal.com
Ho, ho ho! Looks like fun!

Date: 2010-10-14 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
I fear for you it might be too much like work when I hand the whole thing over for you to sort! LOL But I'm glad you liked this bit. :)

Date: 2010-10-14 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estelcontar1.livejournal.com
*It's driving me nuts. Meeeeeeeeeeeeee waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaantssssssssssssssssss more, Preciousssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. g*
Edited Date: 2010-10-14 10:23 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-14 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
LOL! More will come... eventually!

Date: 2010-10-15 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estelcontar1.livejournal.com
Bring it on. The quicker the better. *g*

Date: 2010-10-15 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imbecamiel.livejournal.com
:D Oh, awesome. This is so fun. Hehe, I actually just started re-reading some of your stories again last night... Very much looking forward to seeing the full new one, whenever it's ready!

Date: 2010-10-15 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked this little glimpse. And have fun re-reading! I'm always very humbled when I hear people are re-reading my stuff. :)

Date: 2010-10-15 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilybaggins.livejournal.com
You are KILLING me with anticipation... oh my goodness!

Gandalf dealing with an injured Aragorn while trapped in a cave... that might be my DREAM Aragorn fic. Oh my.

Their mild bickering is awesome---I adore it so much. It appears that Gandalf might be wonderfully protective here.

At any rate, I would expect my father to have better sense than to go tumbling down mountains.”

Hee!!!!!!!!!!!

I know I've been hounding you for AGES for such a fic---bless you for writing such a thing!

Date: 2010-10-15 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Well, I have YOU to thank for the plot bunny, you and your request waaaay back when for an Aragorn-Gandalf h/c drabble. My drabble is now 7 chapters long and looks to be around 10-11 before it's finished! LOL I'm glad you like the little tidbit from it. :)

Date: 2010-10-16 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilybaggins.livejournal.com
*grins*

No hint as to what sort of injury he's suffering from? A nice compound fracture of the leg? A ferocious bear attack? A beautiful impalement from a tree limb? A lovely fractured pelvis?

Any exciting hints at all? :D

Date: 2010-10-16 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Nope. Gonna keep mum about that detail. You'll find out when the story's finished. *g*

Date: 2010-10-17 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilybaggins.livejournal.com
You cruel, cruel thing, you. :)

Date: 2010-10-15 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I love seeing them bickering like this!

Date: 2010-10-15 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Bickering is always fun to write, and those two have a teasing way with each other (I think of Aragorn's telling him that one thing hasn't changed, he still speaks in riddles), so it's been fun to explore their friendship a bit deeper. :)

Date: 2010-10-15 09:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
A great scene.I'm looking forward to this story.

Date: 2010-10-15 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Hope you enjoy the whole thing!

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