If it's written really, really well, then I can usually get into the flow of it. I've read stories where it leant a certain immediacy to the pace that worked, but I've also given up after the first paragraph because it sounds like something written by a middle schooler! It's a risky choice for authors, but done right, it can be brilliant.
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Date: 2014-01-31 01:27 pm (UTC)